This is a pleasant fiction, isn't it?

An EWC4U Flashback

Murder happened this night while one guy was sleeping, having a wet dream.
His mom will find out in the morning and be upset.

His father is an alcoholic who cheats on his wife with a girl named Marie.
Marie is short and thin and she likes to drink Jägermeister.

The cashier who sells it to her has massive ear hair like a forest.
People stare (at it) as if they’re lost in some kind of trance.

One person especially has been in many trances, for he goes to a psychiatrist for his smoking habit.
Little does he know that the psychiatrist himself struggles with smoking.
Not tobacco, but crack cocaine. He gets it from a skinny girl named Marie.

He is ashamed of what he does, but loves it at the same time.
It’s like a Gollum situation. However the psychiatrist is not skinny and malnourished like Gollum, but tall and burly with a pot belly well on the way.

He goes to Xtreme Fitness to try to slim down but he really goes there to meet chicks.
He is in a relationship with Marie [already] but wants more action. His wife doesn’t satisfy him either.

He’s waking up now, finding out [that] his son just had a wet dream.
He laughs at his son with…

One response

  1. What this is is a timed write from my Writer’s Craft class YEARS ago. The idea was to write for five minutes with virtually no stopping to think.

    This is what came out of that…

    November 14, 2010 at 16:02

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